My Tears; Rain Poem by God is Good

My Tears; Rain

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Theres a dark cloud heading our way....
The roar of the thunder scares everyone away...
The flash of lightning makes everyone scream...
Theres a thunderstorm... that's what it seems..

But no one believes looks are decieving..
And no one realizes that I am missing.

Standing in an abandoned field.....
with a young one over my shoulder....
his body now limp, his face now, only bolder....

I lay him on the ground, and stare into his face.
Now, turning ever so peaceful...
Oh my such a disgrace...

Who said that death could ever be so pleasing..
I can't help but shiver, when I see his soul releasing...

To my surprise it stops in front of me...
touching my lips gently,
before leaping into my body...

I awake hours later, and stand up feeling altered...
Now feeling new... not knowing what has occured...

Seeing the dead body, makes me feel dizzy....
and something inside me made me feel uneasy.

The sky had cleared up..
the ground now damp with rain..

But as my eyes fill up...
The storm comes now, again....

Only when the rain falls....
is when my tears are free....

I look up to the sky...
and the clouds will cry for me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Great poem, Kickass details. Very well written.

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Ruth Walters 16 April 2009

Different.....quite like it......Ruthy

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sky dreams 13 April 2009

i really like this poem.. it seems to have meaning behind meanings

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Wildan F Rabbani 11 April 2009

It's too great poem if you're still 13 You touched me by your poem keep on your great work

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you don't write like youre young in age... but who says age has anything to with it? your good.....keep writing... thanks for sharing...

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this poem is amazing! ! ! ! i love how u write with ur thoughts and feelings controlling your pen! ! ! !

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Kat , sorrow 06 June 2009

I love your poetry so much power is in your word Kat sorrow

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Me Myself And I... 05 June 2009

I look up in the sky, And the clouds will cry for me....... Such powerful words... MMI

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Kayla Daley 14 May 2009

I see... you are not the lady of doom but a lady of sadness is all and i know you will turn into the lady of joy very soon (smile) i will pray very much for that to happen. I have had tragedy in my life as well... but gladly God has helped me through it all!

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Darkness Everywhere 03 May 2009

really good well done. please can you have a look at some of my poems sometime please. well done

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