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My Trapped Life

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In a boundary which is built by bricks and stone,
I am trapped in here, from morning until night.
I can’t come out from trapping life due to situation.
As if, I am in depths to depths which is dark.
“I remember the story of past days such as:
The true freedom like birds, golden paddy, the green grass,
And the dewdrop on the grass in the field,
All this brings to heart to make a poem
With freshness and lively touches,
It's the newly-signaling and inspiration to write poetry.”
But today-
Willing of my heart,
It’s filled up by black spots of repentance.
As if, it’s a ruin of bricks and stone like concrete.
My Trapped Life
Monday, December 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: job
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COMMENTS
Mahtab Bangalee 15 February 2020
Willing of my heart, It’s filled up by black spots of repentance. As if, it’s a ruin of bricks and stone like concrete. /// beautiful expression
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Ruby Mostazir 27 February 2019
Yes, We all are trapped in a cycle...nice to read :)
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Md Anisur Rahman 28 February 2019
Thanks for your comment.
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Liza Sudina 18 May 2016
I also live in Megapolis - in a stone city I'm tired of... Heart-felt poem!
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Md Anisur Rahman 28 February 2019
Thank you from my heart.
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Jasbir Chatterjee 05 May 2016
nice poem; thanks for sharing. Can be improved further through polishing of phrases.
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Md Anisur Rahman 28 February 2019
thanks for commenting
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 07 December 2015
Verily, failures and repentance and past memories when introspected, become the cause of great works but only under the condition of truthful to self. Loved reading and commenting, ........10
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Md Anisur Rahman 07 December 2015
Yor are right.I want to become a teacher.So I am studying now.Beside I job in computer lab for my financial problems.At this time electonics life is troubled by me.So I have written this poem.For my felling.Again I inspaire with you.Thank you very much.
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M Asim Nehal 07 December 2015
Trapped within four walls for work and livelihood is very common with 99% of people working in office....Nice poem.10++
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Md Anisur Rahman 07 December 2015
Yes, thats right, but I get to return my past life which was very pleasure and interesting.thank you.
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Md Anisur Rahman 07 December 2015
Yes, thats right, but I want to get return my past life which was very pleasure and interesting.thank you.
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Abbasi Rayhan 07 December 2015
I think that you are a famous poet
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Md Anisur Rahman 07 December 2015
thank you for your comment.
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Abbasi Rayhan 07 December 2015
I agree with you my friend.your poem is very interesting.
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Md Anisur Rahman 07 December 2015
Hi how are you? thank you.
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