Md. Anisur Rahman

My Trapped Life - Poem by Md. Anisur Rahman

In a boundary which is built by bricks and stone,
I am trapped in here, from morning until night.
I can’t come out from trapping life due to situation.
As if, I am in depths to depths which is dark.
“I remember the story of past days such as:
The true freedom like birds, golden paddy, the green grass,
And the dewdrop on the grass in the field,
All this brings to heart to make a poem
With freshness and lively touches,
It's the newly-signaling and inspiration to write poetry.”
But today-
Willing of my heart,
It’s filled up by black spots of repentance.
As if, it’s a ruin of bricks and stone like concrete.

Topic(s) of this poem: job

Comments about My Trapped Life by Md. Anisur Rahman

  • Liza Sudina (5/18/2016 2:10:00 PM)

    I also live in Megapolis - in a stone city I'm tired of...
    Heart-felt poem!
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  • Jasbir Chatterjee (5/5/2016 3:20:00 AM)

    nice poem; thanks for sharing. Can be improved further through polishing of phrases. (Report) Reply

  • Moira Cameron (3/21/2016 1:37:00 AM)

    You write about something to which many people around the world can relate. I like the line 'black spots of repentance'. It is a striking image. (Report) Reply

    Md. Anisur Rahman (3/26/2016 10:02:00 PM)

    Verily, I like that job which is related with poet, poetry, novels, theaters, drama and literature.

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (12/7/2015 8:13:00 AM)

    Verily, failures and repentance and past memories
    when introspected, become the cause of great works
    but only under the condition of truthful to self.
    Loved reading and commenting, ........10
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    Md. Anisur Rahman (12/7/2015 9:31:00 PM)

    Yor are right.I want to become a teacher.So I am studying now.Beside I job in computer lab for my financial problems.At this time electonics life is troubled by me.So I have written this poem.For my felling.Again I inspaire with you.Thank you very much.

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/7/2015 7:42:00 AM)

    Trapped within four walls for work and livelihood is very common with 99% of people working in office....Nice poem.10++ (Report) Reply

    Md. Anisur Rahman (12/7/2015 7:55:00 AM)

    Yes, thats right, but I want to get return my past life which was very pleasure and interesting.thank you.

    Md. Anisur Rahman (12/7/2015 7:54:00 AM)

    Yes, thats right, but I get to return my past life which was very pleasure and interesting.thank you.

  • (12/7/2015 6:54:00 AM)

    I think that you are a famous poet (Report) Reply

    Md. Anisur Rahman (12/7/2015 7:01:00 AM)

    thank you for your comment.

  • (12/7/2015 6:53:00 AM)

    I agree with you my friend.your poem is very interesting. (Report) Reply

    Md. Anisur Rahman (12/7/2015 7:02:00 AM)

    Hi how are you? thank you.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 7, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, December 7, 2015

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