in these lonely summer nights
i occasionally place my bed
in the uppermost floor of my simple abode
it is directly underneath the skies
having only a hip-high structure
on each sides
to secure me when in deep slumber
there are no sheets of steel
no taller columns to block my sight
and with no ugly sounds to bother
and with me, is only my bold confidence
to lay down and spend here the night
in a bed directly beneath the star filled skies....
but as the lonely night grew deeper
my environment resembled like a pool
filled with chilly breeze, and
my frozen thoughts wandered that night
it start to count the distant the stars…
oh yes, i’m pleased to see the sparkles
but I mourned to witness when one, fall
the falling star, it plunged fast
penning a semi-straight line of fire
and for a second… it’s spectacular! !
and then it 's gone forever, it melted in the dark
to nowhere, leaving…
my wish….”to be with her”
to hold her hand... forever
even when my very own sparkles
fade like falling star…
and may it shine again
in another skies..I hope..i hope
nice poem....... well line and verse in to poem. i like reading it.......keep up your good work...... successful will come on your soon...... God bless you alway
nice poem....... well line and verse in to poem. i like reading it.......keep up your good work...... successful will come on your soon...... God bless you alway
i admire the simile employed for the beloved disappearance.10 marks. shan
When longing fills the being.....when time is still in slow motion..... the thread of thoughts.....a joy to read....
Home sick per chance Ariel I think we all suffer from this but I love your poem.tttTTTTTen
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
lovely write..a desperation verses for your love one you longing for...great... Ency Bearis