My Words Poem by Ann Beard

My Words

Rating: 5.0


My words collect in a nonchalant pool,
rides the waterfall with utmost grace.
At the bottom to bounce like a manic fool,
and scatter their logic all over the place.
Then I wade in to search for a jewel.

Roan mar.2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Love this imagery and how you ride the waterfall. I am sure you always end up the right side up. Well done! Karin Anderson 10

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Andrew Blakemore 23 March 2008

You found a real gem here Ann. Andrew x

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Coreena Dejesus 12 March 2008

Ann written nicely, hugs coreena

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And the jewel lies within this poem...Solid Work, Ann, indeed! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Ian Bowen 12 March 2008

Ann, lovely feel in this one. Well written. Ian

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