Come close. I will show you my heart.
do not fret if you feel me shiver.
of all that is human the most fragile part.
it will ripple and gush like a river.
It will beat to the rhythm of steady flight
the darkness feeds well on anxiety
Causing breath to battle a grip so tight
bringing doubt to a moment, s impiety
You can touch, feel how soft and warm
caressed by the years of love it has known.
Unbeaten by every emotional storm,
or empty nest when a fledgling has flown.
Come close. I will show you my heart
it is worn and fragile bears many a scar.
Tears moisten protecting the finest part,
the core where all my best memories are.
Roan Apr.2008
A really beautiful poem Ann, very touching. Best wishes, Andrew x
whoa, i could really feel the rhythm...beautiful poem, you are quite the poet! And the heart theme with the constant beat...everything flowed perfectly! !
yet the story when unveiled by wonders teemed of love, anger, sorrow and mirth altogether and that is the life with which we still move by the years..............well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing
The structure of a poem doesn't get any better than this. It had a nice connective flow to it that made it a most satisfying read. Well done. GW62
A beautiful write from a beautiful heart, that is what shines through...10+
Hi Ann! A delightful read, you have shown your heart at it finest in this poem, from the very core - Where all th' memories are.... Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Come close, I shall unlock my heart Of all sweet sour memories' cart.