Myself Poem by Juneil Sechico

Myself

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Dreamer of tomorrow; painter of my own dream;
Bearer of my own torch, praying for a flame;
Simple yet artistic; simplicity is my art;
Lonely cowboy; a man with a fragile heart.

Hopeless vagabond in the eyes of men;
Poor man trying to make a name;
Unheard though voice is amplified;
The only thing I have is pride.

A chicken wishing to be an eagle;
An ambitious grass trying to stand tall;
An earth waiting for heaven's kiss;
Humiliated; treated by the world as a mess.

Flawed yet aiming for perfection;
Fueled by my righteous ambition;
A horse in a race with a will to win;
Naught can stop, not even the whip and pain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Seltrecht 20 January 2009

I really like this poem I think that we all strive to be the best the we can be. But often times we wonder if it is enough and we try to be someone we are not. Keep writing your great at it.

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Miriam Maia Padua 12 January 2009

great piece....inspiring full of ambition...determination and self confidence and....you're a good poet....

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Ency Bearis 11 January 2009

ambitious with determination..keep the dream and dream..nothing's wrong with it.. you'll never know..that dream of yours will come true..nice write of self determination...10

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Kite Remedy 11 January 2009

you're good at describing yourself, dude.. but, I think there must be some parts that you haven't included.. nice piece, bro..

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Ershad Mazumder 10 January 2009

Know thyself. Thats the way you discover yourself. Very good poem.

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Deborah Cromer 28 July 2009

You certainly have a special way with words. You have some powerful lines that make you read for more. Nice. DC

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Sheilla San Diego 01 May 2009

Man! you're good! really good! And am proud coz you're a Filipino. Keep writing, will keep reading.

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Darkness Everywhere 31 January 2009

a very descriptibe poem well done its a very good read very enjoyable. keep writing. kizzy

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Lynda Robson 22 January 2009

A nice flow to this piece Juneil, we all strive to be better people, well penned, 10 Lynda xxx

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Naidz Ladia 21 January 2009

so humble describing urself thru poetic lines....''urself'' s the best gift given to u..take care of urselfjuneil.. cheers naizz

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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