It is raining
On the streets
I love best.
Your long hair
Is wet and falling
On slender shoulders
That the gods
Would love to caress.
Another excellent little vignette Uriah. Simple yet moving imagery. Sublime work. Keep it up. Please.
simple, gentle, beautiful.. fine work Uriah! keep it up! ! HBH
the joy leaping from every line deep joy not transient heart no longer heavy finally love a wonderful poem
The beauty of this poem rests in its brevity.. It flows like a watercolor through the mind.. Regards, Sandra Fowler
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very romantic.........Great poem Uriah. Sincerely, Mary