New Baby Poem by Practicing Poetess

New Baby

Rating: 5.0

When I first brought you home,
I looked upon
Your pretty little sleeping face
And realised that what I beheld
Was a perfect little package,
A promise being fulfilled,
An empty page on which to write.
And I vowed, then and there,
As you trustingly slept in my arms,
To choose carefully
The words that I would write
Upon that beautiful blank slate.

Thursday, October 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: baby,mother and child ,motherhood,parenting
Tom Allport 09 October 2018

A wonderful poem of showing love and devotion for a new life........well penned PP

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Practicing Poetess 13 October 2018

Tom, Thank you! I receive your comment with gratitude!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 October 2018

Such a wonderful poem........................

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Practicing Poetess 05 October 2018

Thank you, Bernard, for commenting. Glad you enjoyed the poem! :)

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 05 October 2018

a new baby, an empty page.A nice thought provoking poem.+10

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Practicing Poetess 05 October 2018

Akham, Thank you so much for your comment and for rating!

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LOUIS RAMS 04 October 2018

excellent write and deserving of a ten

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Practicing Poetess 04 October 2018

thank you, Louis. This is the way parenthood should be- - taking it seriously, the responsibility we have to shape and help define a new life.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2018

Pretty little face of baby not only attracts attention of mother and grandmother but also attracts attention of all. Carefully they nourish the baby. Much love baby gets in new room in new family. A tender perception of affection is beautifully presented in this poem. This is an excellent sharing done here...10

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Practicing Poetess 04 October 2018

Thank you so much, Kumar, for taking the time to read and comment on my poem, on this YOUR day as Member P.O.D.! I'm amazed you have the time, in the midst of replying to all your comments on your poem! Quite impressed with your graciousness! :)

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