New Dream Blessing Poem by Daniel Miltz

New Dream Blessing

Rating: 3.3


Tis' the bless'ng of a new ep·och
Our cry too vulgar to be heard
O' the world will remember shock
The GOP not with'r, occurred

Soaring for all the world to see
Aye, tis nation vested to we
Convoluted, impaired- yippee
To the threshold, back 'gain with glee

The vista, it spreads wide and clear
It was a hard-won rambling fight
We are a ready, change is here
To make our nation dyno-mite

Giving birth again to the dream
Let America be again
It time to pen new scrolls, a·gleam
Let be the dream, it used to be

© daniel miltz

New Dream Blessing
Saturday, November 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The Dream Of Making America Great Again!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 12 November 2016

Let's get some of that America dyno-mite going. It's about time! After 8 years of nothing to climb! God bless America, land of the free And She sir, thanks you For this nice Poetry.

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John Chizoba Vincent 15 December 2016

Good one

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Daniel Miltz 15 January 2017

thank you, john....much appreciated!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 March 2017

Wide and clear... congrats on being picked...

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Daniel Miltz 13 November 2016

Sandra...that was excellente'

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Chinedu Dike 04 April 2018

Beautiful patriotic piece of poetry embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm.

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Michael Hopkins 15 December 2017

Poems can be political. Poetry explores all aspects of our human existence. Well done and I am a Trump fan also, at least a fan of the message he brings.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 02 March 2017

It was a hard won rambling fight To make America dyno-mite Heartiest Congrats for the win as also on the poem of the Day.

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Christina Simmons 02 March 2017

You've done well with your description; i.e constructing a poem but I don't agree with your theory regarding what seems to be your belief? ? ?

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Bill Cantrell 02 March 2017

My friend, as a poem I think you did a great job, it never ceases to amaze me how hate is vented from others when you have a different viewpoint than theirs, really they are calling you a deplorable because they cannot tolerate your viewpoint which betrays poetic dignity, I'm not a trump fan by any means but I respect your opinion as a person and a poet which is more than I can say for some others, , , , , anyway, , , you made poem of the day, , , not them, I detest those with my way or the highway attitude.

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Detroit, Michigan
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