New Earth Poem by ramesh rai

New Earth

Rating: 5.0


Dani wrote on fb on 31.7.13
When I will be rich
I will buy a planet
Must be a “happy one”
You will be my guest

I wrote in response
Of course!
I will go to that planet
On the wings of imagination

Robert Soffian wrote
When is that?
Dani replied
Soon

Katley Brown wrote
What will you name it?
Dani wrote
“NEW EARTH”

Amber Syriya wrote
I will buy Moon
Where will be everything
To enjoy

This thrown me in dilemma
Is it true for future
Earth and Moon will be purchased
And sold

May be a fun for a poet
With no money to survive life
Dreams in day light
Cast the future

For God’s sake
It be a dream only.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note:
Dani - Daniela Voicu, a Romanian poetess, novelist, painter and a good face book friend
Katley Brown and Amber Syriya – member of face book.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 15 August 2013

very interesting...really...creativity, imagination, desire, fun...all in one package...

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 15 August 2013

yeah agree with Shahzia this is a perfect package for a poem imaginative, creative, and fun but behind that i can feel the hope for new world where sadness and sorrow were replaced with happines, peaceful and togetherness

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Heather Wilkins 15 August 2013

yes for GOD's sake let it be a dream only. good imagination

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David Wood 16 August 2013

Lucky its only a dream - or is it? MOney seems to buy anything these days.

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Neela Nath Das 02 September 2013

The new earth you have woven so nicely!

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Valsa George 27 August 2013

A fascinating write unique in theme and presentation!

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Hazel Durham 20 August 2013

What a thought, a very interesting write, imaginative and fun!

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2013

Oh My God..Couldn't control laughing....Hope such dream may come true...Wonderful write..Really enjoyed reading it..

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Valerie Dohren 16 August 2013

Very imaginative, and fascinating - if I could buy a planet it would be Juoiter, the Bringer of Joy.

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