New Issue Poem by ONElia AVElar

The creative mind is at work here. The rhythm and rhyme of this piece fluctuates a little but the message is quite clear to the reader. The essentials are here, the presentation is not quite there in the body of the work GW62

love when recycles by the dream just as new leaf to the tree greeness plays with the grin and the echo still brims................superb imagery of love when repeated, excellent work, thanks for sharing

a new kid! ? ? are you trying to re-kindle by popping another out? Interesting to see if im interpreting this right in any way at all hahah

Beautiful sentiments inked from your ever-perceptive pen. Lovely. HG: -) xx

I agree with Allie...the whole notion of recycled feelings might sound boring or mundane..; .but you show that it takes you to a new level...and to new generations...love it...Coach

Onelia, A lovely message in it. Life is permanently under construction. Love dies! ! ! it revives, new issue! ! ! new relation, new birth! ! ! new hopes, frustration! ! ! reunion, dip and dive! ! ! new depths strive. CP

A delicate play on 'issue' with 'birth' renewal implications. But the poem is so much deeper... Issue is an end-point to a process worth thinking about! Subtle... Rgds, Ivan

Onelia there is such a clever and yet simple message therein. You poem reminds me of a poem by a poet called Brian Patten, the poem name is 'It is time to tidy up your life'. Your poem mentions mother nature gives us a clue, sometimes I think it's our soul that gives us a clue also. A very lovely poem with multi-layers. HG: -) xx

We often dream of freshness of new love... new offspring.... it is so splendid a thougt a passionate write and I think I should have read this much before.. 10 for this Onelia.. Rgs Rema

recycled feeling or a second-hand heart :) a very good poem...