New Things Turn Obsolete Very Soon.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

New Things Turn Obsolete Very Soon....

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Just like all other new things
they change over time, our hearts perish
nothing is as changeable as the world itself

first a sea of flowers, now a rotten flower stench
old people imprisoned and plugged in retirement homes
as a thank you for their perfect upbringing and the caring loving years

with new shoes we first walk in blisters
gather the right advice and wisdom through our dear parenting

to be told that they are just hiding old people in old people's homes
they still have to explain to me till the smallest details
note, who had done that? They're still from my own years age!
shameful, I hope that's not true!


©Sylvia Frances Chan
A.D. Thursday the 16th of May 2019

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
to be told that they are just hiding old people in old people's homes
they still have to explain to me till the smallest details
note, who had done that? They're still from my own years age!
shameful, I hope that's not true!


©Sylvia Frances Chan
A.D. Thursday the 16th of May 2019
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 16 May 2019

to be told that they are just hiding old people in old people's homes they still have to explain to me till the smallest details note, who had done that? They're still from my own years age! outrageous, I hope that's not true... ...... beautiful

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Thank you so much, dear Prabir, Please, do not quote my words, I wish to read your own thoughts about what my poem is all about. Thank you for your precious visit, but your comment BEAUTIFUL will do either. Thankfully, Sylvie

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 May 2019

The right advice! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you too for the courage. It is not easy to undertake this kind of writing that involves a very sensitive.issue. This write will serve as a stern warning to those who committed such acts and to those who are planning to commit the same.

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Thank YOU too for having read this poem with full thoughts and attention, and for the excellent responses and comments, which do touch the content of this poem and of course my heart, soul and mind, my whole being. Your magnificent responses make my poem(s) complete. Thank YOU.

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This wonderful poem shows kindness and empathy Retirement homes are established to provide care and protection for old people. They should uphold their utmost welfare. Thank you for bringing this social malady right before the eyes of the public.

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Your precious visits I appreciate very much, and what made me happy? All your responses are well thought out replies that come from your serious and beautiful mind. I thank you so much for the comments you have left here, which are true and honest comments, a perfect feedback.

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Once again, your great Poet's pen incisively.strikes those people who commit social mismanagement, which if proven tantamounts to social injustice committed against unfortunate old people.

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Thank you so much, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, your words touch the core of this poem. Thank YOU. I always appreciate poets´visits to my poem site, I appreciate the more for the sublime responses, so perfectly worded and written here. You don´t know how much these words mean to me. GBU.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 May 2019

Shameful, terrible! New Things Turn Obsolete Very Soon, a poem true to facts in life. A social problem. We have the responsibility to care for these all, social mismanagement. Thank you for commenting and responding.

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