Night Creature Poem by Dee Daffodil

Night Creature

Rating: 4.5


I am a creature of the night
That's right
I am a night creature.

Do not be afraid tho,
Fear not
You have nothing to fear from me

Though I prowl through the alleys
And streets
I mean you no harm

However...

There are beasties who are creeping
Round the corner of your mind
And bad guys who are lurking
In the stairways of this rhyme

You might meet a nasty fellow
With a knife or with a gun
It's only just my writing...
The tale's just begun

So although you find me driving
Through your neighborhood late at night
There's no need to fear me,
It's just my poems that cause a fright!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 15 June 2006

Very cleverly done, I find this quite physiologically scarey, but very creative writing indeed Thank you for sharing your art Love Duncan X

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Michael Emine 15 June 2006

Silly girl, you brighten up the day.

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Chuck Audette 16 June 2006

I've heard it said that you are the Siren of the Night. Not sure if that refers to your poetry, though... ; -) -chuck

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~ Jon London ~ 10 February 2009

Ooooh! What a darky poemy this is loved the final lines, gave me goosies lol! 10 for the chilli's Best of health and happiness Jon.

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Barry Van Allen 27 January 2007

Dee, Everything was just fine, until that last sentence, THEN, I got really scared! :)

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Leigh A. Hill 25 June 2006

wow, what a creepy poem! i love it. love starr

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David Darbyshire 22 June 2006

You would protect me no Dee? , I scared..........................have a nice night dave xxx

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Geoff Warden 16 June 2006

Great insperation......but I'm still lost great rite

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