Night Seems Endless Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Night Seems Endless

Rating: 5.0


Insomnia attacks
Heavy raindrops like bullets
Night Seems forever.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 25 January 2021

So very horrible when one has insomnia, it is incurable. The poem has a powerful structure, my spouse has this insomnia too, I know the true meaning of this annoying: 'disease'. Powerful words fill this well captured poem,5 Stars and to my Favourites! Thank you so much for sharing

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Varsha M 25 January 2021

Insomnia is troublesome. It is really though to even spend a moment with it. And on top of it even raindrop which use to charm us now is the sickening thing. Beautiful.

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Rini Shibu 25 January 2021

Sleepless nights are tiring..but turns into poetic lines

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Nabakishore Dash 06 June 2023

Insomnia is a serious sleeping disorder, can give rise to many unborn diseases and too painful to spend the night that appears endless.Short but cute poem.

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Anjandev Roy 13 March 2021

Brilliantly composed.....thank u.....

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Kostas Lagos 26 January 2021

I hate it when it happens. Great poem

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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2021

Profound. Only peace of mind can relive this pain.5**

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 January 2021

That's every night for me! Bravo1

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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