No One Knows Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

No One Knows

Rating: 5.0


Sun is better or the warmth she blows?
Moon is better or the light she shows?

Breeze is better or the air it flows?
Scent is better or the thorns of rose?

Earth is better or the one who compose?
Heaven is better or the hope we repose?

Life is better or the living we pose?
Birth is better or death?

No one knows


(2008/11/11)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christina Clemente 13 November 2008

Interesting poem but most definitely true. love it =]

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Tissa Calvert 13 November 2008

that was very good and I couldn't have said it better myself what a way to go keep it up.

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Life is full of riddles-very well said.a ten from me.

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C T Heart 12 November 2008

Yes! No one knows what lies ahead for us, but it also depends on us how we handle things right...What we have planted yesterday, how we nurture today is what we are going to harvest tomorrow....Great composition. a 10.

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C. P. Sharma 12 November 2008

I love your poetic talent. Your poems flow like a natural spring. I respond to it in the following lines: Sun might burn but she keeps warm, She is the moonlight, does no harm. Breeze is cool but in winter it chills, Rose withers, her scent goes up hills. I am clay but in her poetry I delight, Heaven is dull, I love hope’s flight. Life is bubble, deep calm death flows, Those who dive deep very well know.

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Ewigi Liebe 25 November 2008

yes know one knows but we all have a choices to make it better or not. well penned my friend

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Colm Hayes 23 November 2008

Penetrating piercing questions posed perfectly, you’ll have me pondering for weeks over this beautiful poem.

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Seema Chowdhury 15 November 2008

lovely poem and puts light on the truth of life a. very honest questions you have asked. and the answrers to them are unknown to all. thanks for sharing.

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a gr8 poem...beautifully written

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Lynda Robson 14 November 2008

One of your best in my opinion, good flow and as always very profound, 10 Lynda xx

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