Nothingness Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Nothingness

Rating: 5.0


Loneliness said to me; Make me your companion
And shadow said to me; I am with you all the time
Time said to me; come and walk with me.
The one who never understood me nor became mine,
why do my heart still desire for them.

And then my heart fell for it,
Where only fire dwell for ever
There is neither respite nor solace
all nothingness to dwell in.

Tuesday, March 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nothing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Tanhayi ne mujhse kaha
Humsafar bana lo mujhe
Parchayi ne mujhsekaha
Mai sath hoon tumhare
Waqt ne mujhsekaha
Chal mere sath hi chal

Wo jo kabhi samajh na sake hamein,
wo jo hue na hamare
hum kyun unko
reh reh kar pukare

Dil bhi ajeeb pagal hai
Kyun un se ja laga
Jahan Aag ke sholay hain
Sard aab hi nahi
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 03 April 2016

Powerful thoughts on loneliness felt in life. A wonderful poem.

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Loke Kok Yee 30 March 2016

nothingness is fine when we are gone but in life it makes us all forlorn thanks Asim

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Nosheen Irfan 30 March 2016

Life is a bait for which all humans fall. Though it all amounts to nothing in the end but we willingly fall for the allure. Wonderful poem on nothingness. A perfect 10.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 March 2016

I am with you all the time! Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 29 March 2016

~Even I have fallen for the shadows that life offers. A deep poem. - 10

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