‘Anger is one letter short of danger’
Our life, in many ways it can endanger
Indeed it is a great malaise
And it works in viscious ways
It ruptures many hearts
Piercing them like darts
Holding a long standing grudge
Is like having an erasable smudge
It will always leave a stain
And lead us to irrepressible pain
A person in violent rage
Is like a prisoner in a cage
Anger indeed is a negative emotion
Landing us in violent commotion
Anger steals all our energy
And spoils all synergy
We can at times lose our temper
But remember, to it never surrender!
yes rightly said......... anger is man's most dangerous foe......when we wash our hands in the stream of anger, our hands would never be clean but a permanent mark of grief would get nested on our hands............anger leads to the fatal diseases like envy, hostility, frustration, and even death.............................this poem has succeeded in drawing the clearest portrait of the devilish anger...........................very nice rhyme...........i bet this excellent masterpiece has taken birth in a flow from your mind...............................very nice work..................10 on 10..........you deserve it. thanks.
Anger - a destructive emotion which raises the adrenal level and deeds committed thus are likely to be repented later on.Another great write.Thanks for sharing
We must control all of our emotions. Wonderful thoughts, Valsa. Thanks
Anger management is an art and to use it by diverting to our benefit is another fine art, Very well written Madam, I liked it.
A beautifully crafted poem with great rhyme, nice flow and imbued with wisdom and insight. Yes, anger is one of the negative emotions that we must always abhor. A great poem that captures all the dangers of this negative and violent emotion. Liked the closure lines. Five Stars......and To my Poem List.
This practicality of this poem is abound in the present simulacrum of our lives. Anger has led humanity to wage wars over most trivial of things; the blood shed in these strained times can never be forgotten.
How brilliantly you have introspected and analyzed the chassis of anger! Your first line tells everything....‘Anger is one letter short of danger’. A wonderful poem carrying wisdom! Thanks dear madam for sharing......10
Well expressed emotion. This negative emotion takes a lot from you. The composition is excellent.This is indeed a worthy nugget to earn and learn. Every line is significant. There is always something, that your intelligent mind can focus something to write. There is always a surprise element in your poems. I read two of the precious nuggets and they dazzled me (this nugget is beyond my reach very often)
Let loss of temper be temporary. Never forget to repair any damage caused by anger. Beautiful poem to read and follow.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
in anger many things are said and done which later we regret Thanks Vasa-10