O' My Innocent Heart Poem by Shameem Haider Rao

O' My Innocent Heart

Rating: 4.7


O' Innocent heart what has happened to you
Why I feel pain inside you,
I know its you heart not a brick or stone
But this is not a world, this is an enigma
There are many sympathetic people in every corner
It seem everyone become actor in my street
O' weeping heart no one there but you and me
I expected faith from those
Who do not even know what faith is
I'm silent for my certain reason
Otherwise I Can convince you with my words
O heart be emotionless
Otherwise you will be shattered by this world,
I know one day you will not sound anymore
And we both will be buried together in the ground.

Shameem haider rao

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meena Mustafa 24 February 2014

A heartfelt poem. Nice write. Thanks for sharing

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C. P. Sharma 23 February 2014

Wow! It's great! ! ! ! !

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Barbara Nixon 23 February 2014

Very emotional and heartfelt poem. The world and people can be such a disappointment at times. Inspired write!

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Mary Amrutha 23 February 2014

very gud portrayal of the world where we live in

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 February 2014

Wow awesome poem! Yeah this world is an enigma, a test. Lets hope we pass it, . Kudos poet. Pls review my latest poem too.

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 December 2019

Write comment. " O my innocent heart, Such a beatiful start." Read my poem, Love and Iust, dear Shameem. Thanks

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Kirti Sharma 10 June 2014

O' weeping heart no one there but you and me I expected faith from those Who do not even know what faith is nice lines.. i really like it.. so ful of emotions and loneliness

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Susan Wall 01 May 2014

I think the poem is well written and nice.you have alot of feelings that are expressed in your writting. Keep writting

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Patricia Grantham 30 April 2014

Very touching and heartfelt write. Good descriptions describing the troubles of the heart. You touched mine with your poem. Enjoyed.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 27 April 2014

Flowing words from your deep heart. Like

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Shameem Haider Rao

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