O Piya Poem by Rini Shibu

O Piya

Rating: 5.0

Teri yaad jo Aye
meri aank barr jaye
Ithna muje sathaye
Yeh gam nahi mit paye
O piya yu na satha
Ake gale lagja
Sunle meri dadkan
Bas yeh dhadke tere liye
o piya Jee karthahe
In panchiyo keh tharah
Udke tere paas aau
Yeh dooriya yeh phasle
Yuhi mitjayeh
Aur kahu aakeh tere paas
na jee sakthi tere bina
O piya marjau tere bina

Thursday, March 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: heart song
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Felt to write in hindi
Hope you will like it
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2022

Fantastic. I like this wonderful poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 April 2018

yah avishvasaneey sundar hai bahut pyaar se socha aur likhit main ise bahut maza aaya, agar meree bhaasha meree pratikriya mein doshapoorn hai mainne hindee mein is par tippanee karane kee koshish kee hai apanee aatma ke is kaavy abhivyakti ke lie dhanyavaad.

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Rini Shibu 03 April 2018

Thanks Sylvia for visiting this poem..! ! Rini

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Rini shibu 03 April 2018

Thanks Sylvia for visiting this poem..! ! Rini

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Subhas Chnadra Chakra 16 March 2018

Wow Rini.. you are a nice poetess in Hindi too. Why do you suppress this skill so long? Loved your lines.. In panchiyo keh tharah Udke tere paas aau Yeh dooriya yeh phasle Yuhi mitjayeh 10+++ Subhas

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Rini Shibu 16 March 2018

Thanks for your compliments Subhas

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 March 2018

Dear Rini, you have beautifully inscribed this poem in hindi languge though it is the beginning. Apne kia nehin kya, sukriya.

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Rini Shibu 15 March 2018

Thank you so much Kumarji for reading and commenting

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Akhtar Jawad 15 March 2018

Har bhasha ka kavita meN apna ek saudarya hota hay, Hindi ka saundarya iske geet hayN. Aapne atyant sunder geet likha hay. MaiN ise padhkar gungunane laga..

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Rini shibu 15 March 2018

Thank you so much Akhtarji..! ! Rini

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