Teri yaad jo Aye
meri aank barr jaye
Ithna muje sathaye
Yeh gam nahi mit paye
O piya yu na satha
Ake gale lagja
Sunle meri dadkan
Bas yeh dhadke tere liye
o piya Jee karthahe
In panchiyo keh tharah
Udke tere paas aau
Yeh dooriya yeh phasle
Yuhi mitjayeh
Aur kahu aakeh tere paas
na jee sakthi tere bina
O piya marjau tere bina
yah avishvasaneey sundar hai bahut pyaar se socha aur likhit main ise bahut maza aaya, agar meree bhaasha meree pratikriya mein doshapoorn hai mainne hindee mein is par tippanee karane kee koshish kee hai apanee aatma ke is kaavy abhivyakti ke lie dhanyavaad.
Wow Rini.. you are a nice poetess in Hindi too. Why do you suppress this skill so long? Loved your lines.. In panchiyo keh tharah Udke tere paas aau Yeh dooriya yeh phasle Yuhi mitjayeh 10+++ Subhas
Dear Rini, you have beautifully inscribed this poem in hindi languge though it is the beginning. Apne kia nehin kya, sukriya.
Har bhasha ka kavita meN apna ek saudarya hota hay, Hindi ka saundarya iske geet hayN. Aapne atyant sunder geet likha hay. MaiN ise padhkar gungunane laga..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fantastic. I like this wonderful poem