Oblation Poem by Sathya Narayana
Oblation
Poetry? ! What do I know? ?
Someone unknown stirs the mind
Kneads the thoughts; knits fine rows
Of words and runs my numb hand
He is my invisible tow
Of feel and emotive discord
A good friend and a bad foe
Playing with my passion-world
As if keeping up my vows
Of countless past births’ damp load
To His edicts I kowtow
Offering Him, His own words
It's exactly what I think. you cant plan it, It just happens.
'Someone unknown stirs the mind' - a wonderful way to describe poetic inspiration. Yes, for me they come unannounced and quickly form into verses. I just put the words together, but I wonder who creates those words? Whoever it is, I am thankful that it keeps coming! Linda :)
Indeed..poetry..poems..unusual feelings arousing your thoughts..blinding your mind..but keeping track to what it speaks... Thanks for that numb hand..when words flow..it really feels good inside... Great concept! ..Really amazing write!
Indeed! poetry is not ours.. but of some inspired being that speaks through us!
It's true..a writer sometimes feels..a nice conjoined words into verses...10
yes; He only writes...we are only His writing tools in this world...a poetic idea well conceived and well delivered 10
The mind stirred indeed by yet someone unknown so as not to be recognized on paper. Poetic prose about poetry’s impetus. Well done.
great write... giving tribute through a very beautiful poetry...to POETRY itself... giving POETRY its due...to also feel the love and feel those wonderful words it had shared with every poet's mind and heart...brilliant thoughts sir... (poetry comes from the commands of the heart to our mind to voice out what it feel through lovely, and wonderfuly written words...) 10+++++++
Very true! Poetry comes as a result of inspiration, at times sudden, and at other times remaining in the subconscious mind, -waiting to take shape & form in verse! -Raj Nandy
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Me too...I am no poet, words just come through love of something or experience. This is good Sathya, best description. I love it! 10+++