Ode To The Kite Poem by Dr. M. Asim Nehal

Ode To The Kite

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I am a kite detached from string,
Floating freely in the sky,
Just me with wind, above clear sky
Just me with wind, below dusty earth.

Now my fate is attached to the winder.
Let it take me wherever it wish
I want to see both the ends
From east to west, from north to south

I fear these clouds above
Floating with me as if chasing my whereabouts
They are merciless, dark, thick and stout
They may mistake me as their competitor

I learned a bitter truth during this flight
When I am raising, it is a delight
But when I am cut from the string of the opponent
People enjoy, people dance
But nobody know where I will land.

Friday, October 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: kite,life,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juhaina Tumlu 09 October 2020

Very crafty poem I learned a bitter truth during this flight When I am raising, it is a delight But when I am cut from the string of the opponent People enjoy, people dance But nobody know where I will land.

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Jasmine Shayma 09 October 2020

Great imagery and beautiful journey of kite.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 October 2020

A wonderful imaginative write with compelling imagery. A vivid portrayal of life from the time we were out from the womb of our Mother, we are given the freedom to make our own path towards a fruitful life. We may be swayed by the four elements but we have minds to manipulate and choose our destiny. Beautifully crafted. A one of a kind thought. Top Marks! ! !

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Shreya Hacks 09 October 2020

Oh my favorite kite. I liked. Soaring high. What shall i write no words to describe My kite your kite our kite.10*

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Ricky Manhatten 09 October 2020

Super am a kite detached from string, Floating freely in the sky, Just me with wind, above clear sky Just me with wind, below dusty earth.

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Michael Jack 25 June 2021

I love kite flying.

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Varsha M 10 October 2020

Very true words. People enjoy gossiping, in others downfall. little they know the consequences and the struggle the person is going through.

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Kostas Lagos 10 October 2020

A kite flying free... freedom is what we are looking for...excellent

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Robert Murray Smith 10 October 2020

Imaginative floating on air. Three cheers!

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Paul Ryan 09 October 2020

I like flying kites but never thought of it like this marvelous poem.

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