Of Lies Promises And Prayers... Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Amazing composition, love these.

LOVE THIS! ! ! ! ! Absolutely enjoyed every word 10+

A string of excellent haikus.Loved the selection of words.

the wisdom of the creator is revealed in your poem... its not all in our mind is reflected by our actions... yet. other can predict whats the outcome...our mind speaks, our lips murmor...its not what the mind talk that the lips do...but God know before your mind think and your mouth say... the secret and wisdom of God only reserved to the giver of everything is now.....in our hand..thank you...a 10

This is so rich in visual images. The images are moreover not arbitrary, pretty or 'poetic' - they truly embody your meaning. Three paintings lie beneath the words, waiting to be realized.

all the three were excellent..true..lies has a grin'''promises become hard..and promise is something between the mind and the lip

a theme which can be said everyday feelings...its true and simply good!

Your words pegged each of your titles very well. Your defining of lies, promises and prayers are greater than what the dictionary could label them as. Very nicely done.

I am not ususally a fan of haiku but you have made me like these alot. Great job!

reads great...i personally like few words...more depth