The bestest laid plans
of mice and men done went and
ganged agley today.
Thank you, Soran. I am Woman- I have Mood Swings that wood put a squirrel to shame! ! I like experimenting with different poem lengths and forms. You are so kind in your remarks about my poems- -very Kind
hello it has a different style and theme.. this is a cynical, humorous catching men' foibles.. you are good in both short and long poem, very skilful and clever comparative
The bestest laid plans of mice and men done went and ganged agley today.........ths funny poem regarding failure that you have taken this famous quotation from Robert Burns is much interesting.
it added amusement to repeat part of it in his native language especially since the sounds of the letters and words were so agley in and of themselves!
We usually make foolish and funny things with a chalk on a black board, the teacher erases it with a hidden smile without reading it. So what if a lovely write was also erased unread by the teacher!
ahhhh, I see- -please excuse my confusion, I must have been brain-dead that day!
? ? ? I am not seeing the relevance... are you on the correct page? I know my computer flips from poem to poem and sometimes w/o me knowing it's skipped to another poem
a lovely comparison. mice and man......... and the best laid plans. thank u dear Susan....... i smiled. tony
I had fun playing games with that old quotation by Burns- -glad you enjoyed a chuckle, tony!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Och aye, ma wee lassie. A bokkle a single malt to ye! A bonnie beastie of a poem. And now in English... Two of my favourite writers come together, , correction... three including Saucy Susan!