Oh Birds! Go On Flying Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Oh Birds! Go On Flying

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This is your freedom this is right,
You go on flying in search of light.
At night you take rest and do sing,
While morning will come will ring.

Go on flying to learn and hold love,
This is your duty to fly all and above.
With uncountable feathers you fly,
From horizon to horizon fill the sky.

Let others watch eagerly from a far,
Let them call each of you as tiny star.
Life has to shine and time has to pay,
Sky expresses affection and does say.

Light your life with wisdom of God,
You go on flying towards him, nod.
Oh dear birds you do chirp here soon,
Go on flying without rest even at noon.

Boon falls as a wave instant vibration,
Beloved father ever does keep affection.
Oh birds! You feel this remember father,
Go on flying with no twist do not bother.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,11 April 2015. All rights reserved.

Wednesday, November 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,freedom,life,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2016

picture of Elizabeth Squires xNicely penned piece my friend. Thanks for sharing. 11 Apr 2015 by Elizabeth Squires | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xVery nice work 11 Apr 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xA Song so poetic with its divine undertones most wondrous! Thank you for sharing this captivating poem. 13 Apr 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Dorothy A. Holmes xOh if I were a bird this poem would be my anthem! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing 14 Apr 2015 by Dorothy A. Holmes | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x..........a very special poem...and a beautiful tribute to lovely birds everywhere ★ 16 Apr 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 July 2020

Affection! ! ! Positiveness; Musing along. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mj Lemon 27 November 2016

This is just stunning! There is such a joy and reverence for freedom in these words. Perfectly written.

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Nosheen Irfan 17 November 2016

This poem fills the reader with a sense of freedom. So beautifully written....the flight of a bird n flight of human imagination are so similar.10

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B.m. Biswas 16 November 2016

open sky....free bird..... let the bird of. your heart fly freely eith the message of love and fraternity........lovely.

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Kim Barney 16 November 2016

I love birds and poems about birds. However, if you told them NOT to fly, they would probably just do it anyway. Thanks for posting this, Kumarmani.

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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