Oh Those Threads Poem by Heather Burns

Oh Those Threads

Rating: 5.0


beautiful threads
coming together
gold and silver
tears and laughter

Creating a pattern
You and I
fashioning us
knotted so closely
refusing to fray

A lovely tapestry
inter-woven over
the years

Oh those threads
beautiful threads
together they hold.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soulful Heart 17 July 2013

A web of gossamer threads in different colours..spun thru ur beautiful words..('

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Dave Walker 17 July 2013

A wonderful poem, great way of putting it.

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Dave Walker 17 July 2013

A wonderful poem, great way of putting it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 July 2013

Knotted so closely. Beautiful expression of togetherness. Thank you.

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Somanathan Iyer 18 July 2013

yes, inter-woven skilfully are the relation we behold. nice writing.

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Patricia Grantham 17 July 2013

Threads that are woven together tightly are made to last and will take sometime to fray. Just like love if it is not woven in the heart correctly it will not stand the test of time. A thoughtful write.

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David Wood 17 July 2013

Beautiful threads that bind you to your loved one. A lovely poem.

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R.j. Wynn 17 July 2013

Awesome and dreamy always.

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