On Aging... (Just A Few Lines) Poem by Chuck Audette

On Aging... (Just A Few Lines)

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Time gives a freckle
I laugh on the spot
but these wrinkles,
well,
I like them - NOT! !

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Laughter lines Chuck, laughter lines! Ez

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Jemarie Ragudo 15 August 2007

Wrinkles is the price we pay for growing old. I don't really mind having them (though it would be nice if they're not around) , as long as I live long. Good poem.

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Walterrean Salley 09 August 2012

Life is such a tradeoff. Ying for yang: years for wrinkles. And, besides, some things we gotta live with. Enjoyed this cute little write.

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Dee Daffodil 18 September 2007

Listen...when you're 90...then maybe you can grumble about lines...LOL...right now buddy...you've got nothing to worry about! Hugs, dee

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Anna Russell 12 September 2007

Well, you've been giving all of us laughter lines so it serves you right! Don't worry though, men can get awa with wrinkles - just look at Sean Connery. Hugs Anna xxx

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R H 16 August 2007

Lines define.... and they are probably mighty fine lines at that! jz

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Alison Cassidy 15 August 2007

I guess there is an alternative to growing old... But I think I prefer the wrinkles. Great piece. Many of us oldies understand exactly where you're coming from. love, Allie xxxx

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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