Adeline Foster

Gold Star - 9,222 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

. On The Horns Of The Moon - Poem by Adeline Foster

.On The Horns Of THe Moon

I cannot live in bitter dungeons
In the caverns of your heart
Where roam the flying creatures
Of javelin and dart.

I shall wrap my cloak about me
As the nightside tempests start
In those halls of bitter dungeons,
In the caverns of your heart.

Topic(s) of this poem: memories, nostalgia

Comments about . On The Horns Of The Moon by Adeline Foster

  • Patricia Grantham (7/14/2013 6:47:00 PM)

    Who can know the heart with it's dark and secretive
    contents? Until the heart can become a place wherein
    lies love, peace, grace and mercy then there will be room
    for many to come in and enjoy it. Lovely poem.
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  • (5/15/2013 3:01:00 PM)

    I'm re-reading your poem at your request... it is well worth re-reading... as I said before - fantastic imagery! Terry (Report) Reply

  • (3/7/2013 7:01:00 AM)

    A fine succinct write with good use of the bracketed repeated line at beginning and end for emphasis and poetic effect. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Seale (11/28/2012 5:05:00 PM)

    Adeline, I adore this piece... the title is captivating...exquisite!
    The words pull me as the moon pulls the ocean tides. Outstanding Write! ! ! ; -)
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  • (10/12/2012 6:04:00 AM)

    well penned.. pain is a part of life, suffering is by choice. (Report) Reply

  • (8/16/2012 5:09:00 PM)

    Wonderful... fine imagery... Terry (Report) Reply

  • (8/12/2012 4:20:00 PM)

    So so good, a fantastic poem (Report) Reply

  • (6/27/2012 9:58:00 AM)

    Neat! (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/26/2011 2:21:00 PM)

    'Tis an amazin' Poem! ! top marks! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Michelle Freeman (10/17/2011 9:21:00 PM)

    wow, wow, i like it alot. (Report) Reply

  • (7/30/2011 1:30:00 AM)

    Nice work and wide vision from the caverns.......10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/24/2008 12:05:00 PM)

    loved it, 'specially the repeated lines and ominous feel. -chuck (Report) Reply

  • Linda Ori (10/25/2008 2:47:00 PM)

    Definitely not a warm-hearted poem. Vivid imagery here - painful, cold and bitter.
    Depressingly superb!
    Linda :)
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 25, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 10, 2016

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