Hi sweetie pie so divine
Your beauty is so refined
The day has come to define
You’re my lucrative Valentine
The roses for you are not for any woman
It’s the roses grown from Eden
Our ties are not sudden
We’re closer to heaven
Looking at my bedroom’s wall
I see your ever sweet face there
I smile and take a fall
Your love for me to spare
A walking distance, I walk
To the Gifts’ Shop, I step in
I sigh and take a knock
My head goes gaga, to find the hint
What’s best for you is yet to come
It could be a small token, of no meaning
To tell Mom about you would be no harm
Dad would say “it’s your picking”
Sometimes I wonder, what’s made me love you
I guess your kind heart and understanding
The groove in you and your thick lips too
But most of all, your big blue eyes that conquering
Remember the first time I stared at you?
You were in the lobby ushering me
The next day, we were in bed, encaged, like a zoo
Making love till dawn, like crazy
Dear, on this auspicious date we lay
We conjoin our hearts, souls and love
I propose to you on this Valentine’s Day
May our marriage get the blessing from above
PS: I was inspired by the song ' Try Me ' by the group 'UFO'. The impact of the song has made this poem possible! ! !
ur flow of poetic energy is a universal gift. we r lucky to b here to share those flowless feelings.
Very heart warming and your Valentine is a lucky lady :)
5 Stars full for this great Tribute of Human Love so true. I have enjoyed a very lot!
My wish for all who love on this Valentine's Day, May it Last.
Luvli poem for valentines day to be with the one you love worth all the tea in china ++10++ regards uavaniceone
hey nice write....trully loving and blessing a lifetime valentine! ! ! ..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The extract from Mary Spain's comment: From: Mary Spain (United Kingdom ;) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 2/10/2009 1: 35: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: valentine Sulaiman - have you sent this fine poem to UFO? I'm sure they'd love to know that they'd been your inspiration. Mary