Opulence Poem by Farah Ilyas

i love the comfortable canter of this write....also the changes of patter.... was a joy to read even if the message at points is sad the end seems positive....love this line so much...Satisfaction & contentment are genuine lavishness.

Rich in love is hard to take away from someone, God bless

Where our heart when our eyes here see them suffer? Who are we to blind the sight denying what in our heart? yes Farah, poverty is dangerous treat to human because of this we lose pride we may lose faith only great people will stay then but we as a human should be one and help if hands dont have fingers it wont work well so we should be fingers to work as hand of humanity a great write Farah_Soul

a very nice poem, carrying a strong message...well written

a brilliant topic you have choose, poverty do make one week for many reasons, i mean i am not saying that there are other things to live for but still it is a very important fact that we can not ignore..........good job mam....brilliant write.....again i am a fan

Indeed poverty makes people weak as it narrows discretion. A well articulated and nicely penned poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Truth is such you depicted that two part fantastically decorated and beautified the theme keep it up 10

Contentment's d best wealth as provd by yor fine poem. Kudos!

A very beautiful write, Farah! The whole poem is lovely but the lines I loved most are- Gratification, / Satisfaction & contentment are genuine lavishness. / If our thoughts starts voyage to deem! Great philosophy from so young a mind! Thanks for sharing!

nice, the beginning is very fast with true tinge of truth, the second, reveals more truth..love it