Paupers Poem by Hira Akhtar
Paupers
Pensive about those people
I am hushed with shock
Their beliefs becoming cripple
In life, growing dark
Paupers embellishing grieved huts
In the neck of the woods
Illicit sites, awfully unswept
Kids being beggars in childhoods
Overwhelmed by superstitions,
Immensely necessitous for money
In their visions,
Beg, eat and don't worry
Nabbed by critical misery
Bearing nil aim for life
Ignorance, the very cause of poverty
In pauper's society, peace cann't survive
Drowning in the flood of illiteracy
I year for soon they'll cluntch at a straw
Yet indocrination is the first priority
'Only aware countries evolve'Tis nature's law
Before long, the Sun of fortunes
Aggrandizes with lavished energy
Its heat will scorch all the sins
Pauperism, will meet death ultimately
The people like Quid are needed to improve our conditions.We are connstantly moving towards lowness.But if we hold hope and never let it go we will be soon a firm country.InshAllah
The most important thing Islam also forbids to beg so I am really really desire for my country to improve and to excel in every field of life if and only if we become follower of islam's teachings and learn and teach eagerly. :)
THANK YOU
Hira dear, when I weigh the serenity of your thoughts against your age and experience with life, this composition puts me in surprise. It's highly admirable that you could make such a sore of our society a subject of your poem and wrote about bare facts. You are right they are unaware of the gravity of the situation. can we say ignorance is a bliss for them? Your poem evokes serious thoughts. Keep up sweet girl!
Mature thoughts, I wasn't expecting such from a girl of ur age am greatly amazed by it.this piece shows that u are improving ur skill day by day Great job
great message, beautiful rhymes and of course good poem great job
A poet is he, who feels and then expresses it in a beautiful and impressive manner. You have these qualities.
A well thought poem expressing the concern for poor & illiterate people's misery, what did touch the heart.
A well elaborated poem about the poor & illiterate people's misery. And ultimately the deep concern for them which touches heart.
your poem is important from the angle of a deep thought-process in this tender age... spellings and grammar areas are important too for the grooming, we all should focus on it, but i give you the credit for your serious approach more than everything else! ! ! very good! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I am glad to know about your concern for the poor, the disadvantaged class of the society. The poem adequately expresses the feelings of your tender heart. The problem is not easy to eradicate. Spread of education and establishment of moral values will help ease the situation, but first of all, the politicians of the country must decide what type of a country they would like to build and they would like to be a part of. The note could be curtailed to add to the meaning and the theme of the poem. However, I liked the following part of your note: in my country people having degrees are siiting on shops and those with forged degrees are sitting in conference rooms. I hope, after attaining requisite educational qualification, you will find a way to involve yourself in some efforts to ameliorate the condition of this unfortunate section of the society. I appreciate your poem.