Our Life's Path

Rating: 4.8
Where am I going?
What is my destiny?
A life to be lost,
A soul to be set free.
Just what determines
Your time to the end?
Which path to be taken,
Finding a friend.
Jumping into anything,
Or thinking long and hard,
Right decision, wrong decision.
Finding your guard
Changing life's path
Is not easy to do
But the step you take
Will determine... just who.
Just who you are
And what you have achieved,
You have made these choices following;
Just what you believed.
It was time to move on....
Accepting this
And not seeing it as wrong
Feel so proud
About what you have given,
To others to life,
For this has kept you driven.
Driven hard by wisdom
For that is all you have to give
The need to help others,
The need to live.
So hello to my destiny,
You are not far away,
You are getting closer and closer, ..
Day by day.

Copyright Reserved May 2014
Monday, October 29, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: wisdom,believe,change,destiny,hope,inspiration
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 May 2019
Driven hard by wisdom for that is all you have to give The need to help others, the need to live. So hello to my destiny, you are not far away, You are getting closer and closer, .. day by day.......so touching with nice theme. It is really a beautiful poem on life and destiny having touching expression. Thanks for sharing. A10
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Valerie Dohren 31 January 2013
Wonderful poem Lyn, beautifully written, and with a great message.
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Chandra Thiagarajan 28 December 2012
Your deep thoughts of wisdom in Our Life's path captures my heart! Enjoyed it!
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Valsa George 09 December 2012
A poem worth pondering over! Feel proud about what you have given to others - A lovely thought!
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Gillian Commerford 17 November 2012
Find your poem's interesting and share many of your sentiments.Thanks for your comment on my poem Waiting To Be Eaten
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Bev Haigh 12 November 2012
thought provoking poem, love it Lyn x
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Red O'mara 12 November 2012
Lovely poem, Lyn. Makes this reader feel vaguely failed.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 07 November 2012
we have to do so much in the world! well written!
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Ruby Honeytip 31 October 2012
I love the depth of thought these words pull forward. Great poetry indeed [3
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