Outspoken Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Outspoken

Rating: 3.8


A fragile bird sings strong,
Despite that those who believe it's flawed
Can mute its voice by force,
Because the silence's pain is worse,
Preferring to be restricted by the dim
Than by cowardice within.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 23 September 2012

really amazing, a phenomenal write indeed, i told you i'll love it and i did thank you for sharing love payal

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Poetheart Morgan 22 September 2012

No one can mute the voice of poet even by force! ! ! And you are a Poetess, Well done! ! !

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Margaret Haig 22 September 2012

Great choice of words and we can into. Behind the story try to add a few more verses, when I learnt theory of music you write poetry then put it to music, and the teacher taught me a good poem has a few stanzas or verses, to build on. But still great work. 95/100

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