Our Battle Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Our Battle

Rating: 4.7


No matter the length that we're apart,
No matter if you start losing faith,
Remember why we still persevere.
No matter who steals away our time,
No matter if our love is their crime,
Remember that it's you I endear.
No matter what obstacles await us,
No matter whose grudge must make these rules,
Remember I'll never disappear.
No matter how dangerous the path,
No matter if we invoke such wrath,
Remember in heart, I'm always there.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anthony Mcduffie 30 June 2012

Keep up the great work! ! :) It is wonderful!

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Katy Lue 30 June 2012

This is a poem for a romatic, and even if your far from it you are still touched by the words. Nice job!

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Hamid Negah 01 July 2012

Dear Rose, Thanks for sharing it. And please keep writing.

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Zaraya Berry 01 July 2012

hi that was a cool poem how did u come up with it

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Adam Reed 09 July 2012

i think it should be called No matter what lol it was a good write keep it up

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Hazel Durham 22 September 2012

I loved this poem, with its powerful message to never give up what you believe in that is what true love means. Excellent!

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Cosmic Dreamer 21 August 2012

I like this one... True love shall conquer all... When you write from the heart, it is never wrong... Well done...

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Captain Cur 11 July 2012

Great inspirational write! Enjoyed the metered cadence as well as the message.

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Hilal Yilmaz 10 July 2012

Wow, that's a really great poem. I love your write[3

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Adebowale Emmanuel 10 July 2012

tiffany this is such a wonderful work from you it will really help the couple to have a sustainable marriage.

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