Lust busy; lechery engaged too
On floor of glamour, clamour stiletto
Modesty roams free; under marquee
Long live page 3
Necklines plunge, Hemlines soar
Botoxed faces smile evermore
Sozzled spirits revel in revrie
Long live page 3
The diamond ring caught infection
It changed fingers too often
Pendant enjoys though; premier mid riff show
Ogles toggle; free
Long live page 3
Values valued at the lowest
Treachery held in esteem highest
Honesty waits for its turn
Gets only heartburn
hard on rocks, life on a spinning spree
Long live the page 3.
its like reliving all the horrible stories of Page 3 Ofcourse... well penned... :)
Values valued at the lowest Treachery held in esteem highest Honesty waits for its turn Gets only heartburn hard on rocks, life on a spinning spree Long live the page 3. A socially constructed reality of life, thats what comes to mind reading your poem. 5/9/09
This is all new to me and hope it doesn't travel to Australia. You paint a picture of soulless people with lechery, free modesty, and botox people. Sozzled is a great work and it means drunk according to the dictionary! The infection of the diamond ring is such creative imagery. Loved it! 10 love Karin
Necklines plunge, Helmlines soar Botoxed faces smile evermore Sozzled spirits revel in revrie Long live page 3 yeyyyyyyyyy long live PAGE 3 one goes upwards the other downwards where do they meet? ? ? do you have an answer? whatever, a good satire A+++ anjali
You have written out strong points in this. Your imagination mixed together with reality has created a powerful poem. There is a line of darkness that runs through this in places. Well done and nice work! Once again you create a talented piece. DC
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nikunj ji...a satirical take on the page 3 life that is shallow from inside....beautifully done...10 all the way.