Pain~ Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Pain~

Rating: 4.5


It always arrives uninvited
Into my life much rain must fall...
Un-nerving me and my well being
My body? Why pain wants it all;

It has become a constant companion
With nary a break or a pause...
Awakening every day in wonder and what if's...
Of the uncomfortable this condition does cause;

It travels a circuit - almost constant
There is no position that seems right- -
Inflamation's pain - is truly unrelenting
As i continue to fight with all my might;

It keeps me a prisoner and bed ridden...
No reprieve is ever given to me- -
A visitor that i prayed would leave- -
Alas, realizing - that is never to be;

It reminds me always of it's angry presence...
Oft' times making me cry...
As i am left here in suspended animation- -
Biding my time - just waiting to die;


By, Theodora Onken
March 7,2014

Friday, March 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 13 March 2014

So poignant but so true. From a long distance apart - I only can wish you to be...... free from all these pains.

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Theodora Onken 14 March 2014

Amitava - thank you for reading my work and taking the time to comment. You are very much appreciated! ! !

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Hans Vr 14 March 2014

Dear Theo, I think I can understand a bit of the suffering expressed here. Pain feels like being in a desert full of heat and ennui. When we finally find a position with a bit less pain, it is like an oasis. I expressed this in one poem (Y/. a tough ride) which I invite you to read. I truly wish you can find many oasis today where the pain moves a bit to the background, I wish you lots and lots of strength.

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Valerie Dohren 14 March 2014

I hope your pain is not permanent Theo, but I understand your plight having had my fair share of it. Very well expressed here, and my very best wishes for you to get some respite.

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Muhammad Ali 28 March 2014

Poem is nice. And poem is difficult to comment. Pain is uninvited.. In life. Before this, life is uninvited too.

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Theodora Onken 15 March 2014

Malini, i thank you for reading and commenting. It is a situation i have learned to live with.

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Theodora Onken 15 March 2014

Valerie, Thank you so very much dear! Have learned to live with it. Best wishes to you as well.

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Theodora Onken 15 March 2014

Hans, thank you so very much. So appreciate your reading, commenting and understanding.

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Malini Kadir 14 March 2014

each human can connect with you in this write....and pain is here to leave with time... time heals.......

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