Time that stride where panorama abides
Viewed by different eyes yet the same things coincide.
Flawless tears praised the virtues of rain.
Clouds of thunderbolt shook the tree of pellets.
Summers steam had the whiff of hot spells.
Winter interlaced the dribbles into snow blanket.
Ripened days cropped up with distasteful appetite.
Spring just sprang up waking all desires.
Everything hangs in where vitality lay nested.
Picturesque ambience fills the bouquet in one frame
Yet eyes still searching for something and beyond.
© 2016 Geetha Jayakumar. All rights reserved
Spring just sprang up waking all desires. Everything hangs in where vitality lay nested. - - - - - A wonderful write.Thank you for sharing.
Summary of scenic beauty is interestingly drawn in this poem. Clouds of thunderbolt shook the tree of pellets. Rain come by virtue to this paradise. Spring has arrived with beautiful desires. An amazing composition is shared here. Revisiting this poem values more...10
Our minds swing with the change of seasons. Our eyes seek a beauty farther beyond they can see. 'Spring just sprang up waking all desires' - loved this line, a wonderful expression!
A good attempt in the chapter of scenic beauty. Thank you very much, Geetha.
eyes still searching for something and beyond.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - now isn't that the truth? No matter how lovely the scenery right before us, our eyes soon begin to wander seeking further delights. No matter how lovely the house we live in our eyes wander toward another house down the street. No matter how good the job we hold, we gaze with envy at the job someone else holds. I think our panoramic frames can get us into big trouble! Love the way you handled this topic, Geetha.
A mesmerizing picture of spring. But yes, the heart yearns for something more. The insatiable hunger of the heart n soul of man takes us beyond this world, to the space n the moon.10
Beyond the frame, we look for something more! We are never satisfied with what we have already caught in our frame of vision and our quest after newer things continues without end! An insightful write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It was like designed to create a song mam, well written.
Thank you Vaidyanathan!