At times,
You excite me so much
And many a time
Deeply hurt me too
Throwing up surprises
Is no strange for you
And smart enough for
Deeds melancholy
Still I wait in vain
For the moment of magic
Through myriad touches
And it's great to feel such
Immense sighs of relief
You fill
Brimming courage
To sail through life
And take me round
The layers of choke
You chuckle me often
And puzzle me too
The sense of rhythm
In every swing
With varied angles
And countless heights
You pass through lungs
And cheer them up
You keep them high
And make them fly
With stunning beauty
You thrill my sight
And naughty enough
To make me gay
You haunt me
As an Eagle in sky
And soak me well with
The paradise of fantasies
You move my soul
And often
Prove your role
Well, in case
You fail to emote
Any of these
Then for sure
You are never
My ardent verse
layer upon layer of fantazical stimulation from apparently the subjects fantasy love or otherwise real one, , , , , ,
A fantastic write each line carries value.........and it is exotic.....surprises always there not only in love but in life too......
The ardent verse, the inspiration of lives and fantancy of creative minds must always give paradise? ? ? Great imagery here........Thanks!
a fantastic write with excellent flow and beauty....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
praise of verses in word terse.....good write..........