You and me
In our passionate embrace
Remain warm and cozy
Free from the coldness of outer world.
You remove your skin
And I shall put mine.
Your voice will intoxicate,
And my mind will write romance.
No need for any furnace to melt the iron
Just pour your passion
Everything will melt.
Even a petal between us
Will be the distance of eternity.
Let our love loose
To freeze the time
Let the wind spread
Our fragrance
Let the waves of emotions
freed from the sea.
DJ is to old for romance but like young ones to read and love it.10
Wonderful lines Let our love loose To freeze the time Let the wind spread Our fragrance Let the waves of emotions freed from the sea.
In first 6 lines poet speaks about forgetting everything else and indulge in love. Second 7 lines about passion in love. Last 6 lines about attaining eternity in love. As a critic I would say passion and romance runs parallel and never meet.
Your voice will intoxicate, And my mind will write romance. No need for any furnace to melt the iron...haunting expression. Beautiful poem. Five stars.
Let our love loose To freeze the time Let the wind spread Our fragrance Let the waves of emotions freed from the sea..... touchy lines.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth from the heart, lovely and very passionate with strong emotions.