Passion And Romance....❤️ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Passion And Romance....❤️

Rating: 4.9


You and me
In our passionate embrace
Remain warm and cozy
Free from the coldness of outer world.
You remove your skin
And I shall put mine.

Your voice will intoxicate,
And my mind will write romance.
No need for any furnace to melt the iron
Just pour your passion
Everything will melt.
Even a petal between us
Will be the distance of eternity.

Let our love loose
To freeze the time
Let the wind spread
Our fragrance
Let the waves of emotions
freed from the sea.

Friday, August 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: passion,romance,romanticism
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 13 September 2020

A beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth from the heart, lovely and very passionate with strong emotions.

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Darren Jkoeryo 03 September 2020

DJ is to old for romance but like young ones to read and love it.10

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Michael Jack 25 August 2020

Wonderful lines Let our love loose To freeze the time Let the wind spread Our fragrance Let the waves of emotions freed from the sea.

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S H 23 August 2020

In first 6 lines poet speaks about forgetting everything else and indulge in love. Second 7 lines about passion in love. Last 6 lines about attaining eternity in love. As a critic I would say passion and romance runs parallel and never meet.

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Suzon Albert 22 August 2020

A very romantic poem written with lots of passion.10+

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 June 2021

Your voice will intoxicate, And my mind will write romance. No need for any furnace to melt the iron...haunting expression. Beautiful poem. Five stars.

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Varsha M 15 February 2021

Let our love loose To freeze the time Let the wind spread Our fragrance Let the waves of emotions freed from the sea..... touchy lines.

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Ravinder Kumar Soni 15 February 2021

Lovely expression.

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Bara Nakene 31 January 2021

Love all over again. Making this poem wonderful.

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Rajeshwari Bala 31 January 2021

💘 is magical. It creates what is not.

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