Peace Until Eternity Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Peace Until Eternity

Rating: 5.0


Oh Peace
Where are you?
Are you that bird flying
Up high looking
For lush forest
For your lovely nest?
Are you in the
Strings of rain
That fell in the curves
Of the mountain rocks
Hiding from the claws
Of humanity?

Oh Peace
Do not hide
We want to know you
Be with you
Dwell with you
Until Eternity.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 08 July 2021

1) Indeed, Peace WHERE are YOU? ! I cite you here your last stanza: : Oh Peace Do not hide We want to know you Be with you Dwell with you Until Eternity. Most touching poem and so sweetest rendered. Very impressive words, marvelously worded.5 Stars full on Top! To my Favourites

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Sandra Feldman 08 July 2021

A poem so worthy of all our admiration and love. Woven with the glory of a peace loving dove.

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Li Su Pen 08 July 2021

With love and peace)

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Varsha M 08 July 2021

Rose Marie peace is a piece right beside us if you can see for pollution of doubt allows us not to see it best. Peace of my masterpiece hide no more please. Beautiful composition.

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Oh Peace Where are you? Are you that bird flying Up high looking For lush forest For your lovely nest?

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Nabakishore Dash 01 September 2021

Nice honest desire.I welcome your great mind.

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Nabakishore Dash 27 August 2021

Very heart touching, .Wonderful expression

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Nabakishore Dash 27 August 2021

Your comments are very encouraging and blissful really.I thank u from the bottom of my heart.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 August 2021

This poem still fascinates me, truly a profound poem. Yes! Peace until Eternity! Powerfully worded.I like it very very much!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 August 2021

Rereading this most touching poem so amazingly worded, and the undertones left are still very touching to me. Thank you so much for this mesmerizing poem. It does me good having reread thia.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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