Pen And Poem Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Pen And Poem

Rating: 5.0


no fountain descending
touching the body of the mountain

it's a city of the windy fogs
the winter hugging the morning sun

the coiling smoke going up
from the hot teacup

the damping roads seizing my pen
all tears on the white paper-
like a coffin in a bier
on the shoulder of the undertaker

wiping pain from the heart
I'm coming back to the sky

Pen and poem my praying for inside tranquility



-08.12.2020 Chattogram

Tuesday, December 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life,peaceful,ways
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Britte Ninad 27 January 2021

Pen and poem my praying for inside tranquility ~nice craftmanship

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 December 2020

" Turmoil of thoughts and gliding emotions In the company of throbbing heart. A boon or a curse gifted to a poet, Enhancing poor soul's complications" ! Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.5 stars.

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Varsha M 08 December 2020

Beautiful poetic expression. Well penned. Indeed poem and pen serve tranquility. Meaningful poetry.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 December 2020

A pen and a poem can redress a poets pains. This is a nice poem, with relatable imagery. 'like a coffin in a bier on the shoulder of the undertaker' - it's a wonderful depiction. 'Pen and poem my praying for inside tranquility' - this too is a touching expression.

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