What is in common
between
a Penguin and a Poet?
You may guess
the PEN?
Or the bizarre
Dress Code?
I think they both,
like Fallen Angels
from the Heaven
with hints of Wings
are walking thoughtful
on the Earth
and only
while swimming
in the Ocean
(of Words) :
they leave the Earth
show Wings in Action,
in Swimming - Flying,
nimbleness,
(nimbuses) ,
a heavenly Strength...
Sofia,06.06.2008
The analogy of the penguin 'flying' freely in the water and the poet swimming amongst a sea of words is both striking and engaging. The essence of freedom abounds for both...Perhaps the the black and white of the penguin corrresponds to the poet's black ink on a white page too...just a thought... j xx
penguins by the shore i see on national geographic make me think of nuns strolling around a convent!
Last week I saw fairy penguins again... and this week I still miss you.. Come Back specialist ONe... Happy Happy New Year in Sofia or wherever you are... muchest aroha Deana xxxx
Fantastic the way you build and structure your theme...your insight is matched only by your prowess with words...Coach
for quite sometime, I've compared in my thoughts of men in black looking like penguins without the ties... :) good imagination...
incredible imagination onelia! i tend to imagine myself one...of course with a poetic head...ten
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Quite amazing write.... thought yet passionate1 A 10. provoking