~ Perspicacité ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

keen vision, the MOTHER of all invention! ! You have done well. Its every poet dream to have those tools to work with. So as a reminder, i'll be putting up this list on my wall. Thanks for sharing. a+++

Besides all sights, there is a seen which always reflects in a mirror lives inside us! This poem reflects the same thoughts nicely...

wait...aaaa....circum-sight.....(POK...hehehehehehhe) ...hmmm, i just wanted to say thanks for ur new abbrev..GOK....POK....lavs ya dear, GOK.....smileeeee

that's very nice! you didn't tell me is this way of writing from your innovations? thanks for sharing

a nice array of worded lights...well lit... a twilight zone poem...10

You are very originalistic with your word play here, very good poem.

Clever couplet in conclusion to a series of observatory functions of similar word endings.We are left in no doubt as to the importance of insight.10.

Very original, the use of insight and sight. What a wonderful play of insight and yet keeping the reader so totally engrossed from start to finish. You have such a way to write with your own spirit and originality. Impressed.

Very clever and original thinking, Niv. Lovely use of language.

Aerial-sight Panoramic-sight Are but Shot-sight Short-sight..nicely presented.....10 Short of sight Always dark and no light no love but only hatred To dooms day it may lead