Crimson Love

Rookie - 86 Points (18 / Prince Charming)

Phantom - Poem by Crimson Love

I sense my beauteuos phantom,
Where she is...I do not know,
A game of hide and seek,
I always seem to lose.

A delicate apparition,
Coming in sight, to only dissapear,
Taunting me with the beauty I have yet to see,
A faceless woman is whom I seek,
A saddened life, one left so bleak.

Your airy form appears, Only to my mind,
Such a pleasant fiction,
That eludes every fact,
Am I wasting my time?


Comments about Phantom by Crimson Love

  • Jacqui BroadJacqui Broad (10/7/2011 3:38:00 PM)

    Do you believe in ghosts, then? :) You write in a very peculiar fashion. One just want to read more, unravel the puzzle. You're good. You should become a mystery writer... :) (Report)Reply

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  • Crimson Love (10/6/2011 7:38:00 PM)

    Leslie...Perhaps the reason is that I like women? hmmmm.......... (Report)Reply

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (10/6/2011 7:28:00 PM)

    As a girl, why is ur phantom a girl? Not Bad! ! not bad at all. (Report)Reply

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  • Stefanie Fontker (10/6/2011 6:07:00 PM)

    I genuinely love this, it is perhaps one of your best works. Time wasted, is not time wasted until you have named it so, I hope it all works out. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, October 7, 2011


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