Rise up from the ashes of a burned love.
Resurrect your heart, to not make it whole,
Just enough to keep you alive,
Let your Crimson flow through the ashes of a once whole heart,
Mix ash and crimson together,
for a love not even death can impart,
we'll remain in eachothers singed hearts,
Forever lovers, Wherever death takes you I shall follow.
Rise up From the ashes of a burned love
Resurrect your heart, to not make it whole,
Just enough to keep you alive,
Lovers forever even in death shall our love thrive.
Again Crimson, you did writing a subject i writing now..Pheonix, hahahaha...our mind just talk in same way maybe? ? did you read mine? hahaha joking..Yes this is beautiful write Crimson...A pack Crimson ashes dissolve in heart and rise again in form of love..Nice write and i like few lines there, sweet write! _Unwritten Soul
Interesting poem. why do u associate love with death though 'Wherever death takes you I shall follow.' Love is life.
Outburst of the heart clearly embedded in this fabulous and well penned write! About love, I have lived it in different forms but about love after Death, I don't have any idea and I am not interested! A well deserved 10+++ for this amazing write! Keep inspiring the World! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City....
Concerning LOVE and DEATH. I think i understand you very well, sometimes love dont end after death.
Nice one dear, you Good. It seems your in love or you have experienced love before, because most of your work are centered on LOVE
@Leslie; Love might be life, But is there only love in life and not in death? And I'm not talking about killing yourself to follow them, its simply meaning even death can't keep love apart, and when death comes, your love doesn't die, you'll be together again, in some way.
It really great and very expressive.Thanks a lot for you invitation.I hope to accept me as one of your friends.
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I would like to translate this poem
wow, i really liked that. it was sooo meaningful nd deep. it was like u put a peice of ur soul in it. i admire that, i wish i could write like u