P-H's Cowboy Ron Williams & Susan Williams, & Horses In Heaven? ....[ 3: 30 A. M.; What Am I Doing? ; Ha Ha! ] Poem by Bri Edwards

P-H's Cowboy Ron Williams & Susan Williams, & Horses In Heaven? ....[ 3: 30 A. M.; What Am I Doing? ; Ha Ha! ]

Rating: 5.0


I woke up after a few-hours sleep, and thought to myself: 'Horses in Heaven'.
I made a sandwich of half-burned beef liver & added mustard. I should sleep...
again around '7'.
I only get a gourmet sandwich when the cook, my wife, is away for a while.
Now, careful, Readers! Don't let me see any of YOU turn up your lips with a smile!

And what P-H members might I first think of with 'horses'? Ron & Susan Williams!
I'll bet they are some of the horse-lovers you'd see at their State Fair pavilions.
Now, on P-H, Susan is pictured on a horse. A horse photo, for one of his poems, ...
Ron features.
I wonder to myself: 'Do my friends Susan W. and Ron W. feel so good with other, , ,
non-human creatures? '

I'm not sure what my brain was thinking when it conceived of Horses in Heaven,
BUT, IF I don't shut down (again) my wife's PC, I'll never get back to bed by '7'!

Good Morning!

(July 6th,2023)

bri edwards
:)
p.s. You might (or might NOT) like Sheeya Hacks' new poem 'What A Destiny Of Cigarette Butts'. ;) :)

Thursday, July 6, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: horses,human and animal,humorous,short,famous poets,heaven
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 06 July 2023

Always different from the LOT. This one is on different line altogether, I think it's time for me to search and change my profile photo with the one I have on HORSE. Let me search and replace. By the way I will read the poem by Sheeya now.

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M. Asim Nehal 06 July 2023

Full Stars.....***** for thinking about Horses in Heaven.

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Susan Williams 09 July 2023

now you know a horse lover's secret---life without a horse to ride the hills with, to share middle of the night thoughts with, to feel that sweet connection to a large amd always half=wild creature makes life a wonderful place to be---top marks for writing about the love of a horse! ! ! !

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Bri Edwards 07 July 2023

Friend (PH) Kim Barney (with an 'e') read thie poem and now tells me that Cowboy Ron Williams has a poem 'Horses In Heaven' AND that I, Bri, commented on it once. So what, Kim? ? ? bri ;) Kim, MY POEM'S title is BIGGER! !

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Kim Barney 11 July 2023

Your poem titles are ALWAYS bigger. Bigger doesn't mean better. Take the advice of Anais and shorten your titles.

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Kim Barney 06 July 2023

Cowboy Ron beat you to it, Bri. He already HAS a poem called 'Horses in Heaven', and you left at least one comment on it. And you thought this was YOUR idea?

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Bri Edwards 06 July 2023

(cont.) I'm sure I'd seen Sheeya's horse picture before last night; maybe I subconsiously recalled seeing it. hmm? bri : 0

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Bri Edwards 06 July 2023

Please read my ' p.s. ' after the poem. AND, since 'submitting' my poem, I 'was reminded' that Sheeya features a picture of a HORSE, for goodness sake, on her PH pages. (cont.)

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