Pitter patter morning rain,
Falling on my window pane,
Life just doesn't feel the same,
Longing to see you again.
Pitter patter morning sound,
Rain is falling on the ground,
Thinking back on memories,
Days so fine just you and me.
Pitter patter love you so,
As time goes by I miss your glow,
A fact of life you had to go,
Feeling sad, feeling low.
Jayne Louise Davies
Thanks everyone x Your encouraging words mean a lot x
Almost sounds like a children's song with an touch. Very well done, Jayne!
Rain evokes mixed emotions in us. You feel both happy and sad. The magic effect of rain is beautifully captured in easy flow and rhythm!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Loved this rhythmic poem... Top score