Playmate! Poem by Shahzia Batool

Playmate!

Rating: 3.8


Fortune thinks
We are kids
So She always plays with us
Dodging, blind and guessing games;
See-saw, hurdles, hide-n-seek;
Her swings of different, different nature,
Makes the life as a roller-coaster
All Her games are really strange
Never aught of our own choice;
That is why
She dodges us;
But She is right
'cause we are really foolish kids
Ignorant of her cunning tricks.
In this state
When we yield,
She conquers us and wins...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sharad Juneja 14 April 2012

very nice one Shazia.....

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Rigzin Namgyal 15 April 2012

..she indeed does... ..a nice poem Shazia...

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Vipins Puthooran 17 April 2012

Fortune thinks We are kids So She always plays with us ///// (((really excellent............. fate thinks we are fools so He always wins)))))))))))

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Sibghatullah Khan 23 April 2012

Reminds me of the Tweedlelum-Tweedledee of Hamlet, Rosencrantz and Guildenstern. One of them said, talking to Hamlet: We are not the very buttons on Fortune's cap. When, like a strumpet, Fortune dodges us and knocks us about, we muck about like bats for some anchorage in life. Sometimes, only sometimes, she lets us eat some crumbs from her table-the occasional episodes of happiness in the general drama of pain, as Hardy would have it-and then starts playing the blindman's buff with us again. Her wiles and guiles (her cunning tricks, as you say) ultimately get her on the victory stand, and our ends are shaped by her (or her alter ego, Divinity) , rough hew them how we will. A beautiful piece of art! ! Thumbs up Shazia! ! An aside: For one thing, feminine gender pronoun She used for Fortune makes her a good fare for a feminist reading.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 April 2012

very nice.true and honest.liked it.

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Ramesh Rai 05 July 2013

we all are the doll of time beautiful

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Heather Wilkins 23 June 2013

fortune plays games with our minds. when we yield she conquers us and wins.

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Valerie Dohren 02 June 2012

Great piece of poetry - we are all the designers of our own fortune. Very well written.

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Payal Parande 26 May 2012

beautiful................................

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Captain Cur 23 May 2012

Fortune is the play, and we the actors and actresses, and we read to Her script. Well done!

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