Pleasant green....
Oh, I almost forget to ask
is this a nice story or not?
you have to say that yourself
I choose the green tree lane
my favorite colour since childhood
but oh, why is this man so strange
he stares at me all in a range
that miserable creature
won't leave me alone
i pretend not to see him,
now I feel comfortable
wherever I drive, he also drives
along green meadows
I see a hill in the distance
of stone and lime
the rest are bald, a donkey that brags
the green trees have disappeared
make way for the man in gray
together with his darling
what should i do with this man, this thing?
I want to be alone with the sky, wind and trees
but the man as gray as street dust
commands me to lie down
there is no alternative
he can kill me
I have such fear that terrible fear
the rocks have multiplied
no sea or beach
the green of the meadows
has disappeared quite a while
the sky is ash gray and oppressive dark
the chirpings have disappeared
I suddenly got sleep
so many horses never seen
strange, they are not noisy
seeing the freedom, I´m very happy
I miss the sun, the water and the beach
black ravens fly around
they make it all too furry
the ravens and the black seagulls
I don't see the lapwing
the man lies improperly next to me
I'm really sad, this thing!
he is unexpected to me
one thing all the time
who is to blame?
whose shame is it?
I overslept my hours
no, had no bad dreams
just irritating nightmares
I drove up the green trees lane again
and through roads black as the midnight
midnight? !
sweetie, it is already late in the afternoon....
© Sylvia Frances Chan
Thank you so much, Rev. Bernard, for your compliments and the 10+++++++++.
Affinity with the soothing green color and greenery is wonderful and in tune with the magnanimity of mother nature. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Thank you for your kindest response and your precious visit and 10.
Ah, this is a very nice story of course we say. We pay our attention and we dance in bay. In bay we sing and in ring we dance. We are very happy as to read this poem we get chance. Suddenly we wake from very light sleep and we read your lovely poem in thought of deep. This splendid poem is of course very green. In breath of greenness your nice words are ever seen. Poets thank Poem Hunter we thank you, in the same name just I have posted a poem new...10
Thank you so much dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir, In this poem I had an irritating nightmare. terrible, but it ended perfectly. I was too late awake, already late in the afternoon.Thank you so much for your rhyming response. Beautifully presented.
Wonderful dear poetess SFC. You look like a queen. Stay always happy and blessed. Top score.