Poem 1 Poem by azadeh salehian
Poem 1
On the skin of our house
Grows abundant strong hair
Serpents lurk around them
lurk around and around
they eat and drink the roots
of the extra strong hair
beneath the roof
Children suck the sap
of
Fathers and mothers who
hide themselves beneath the floor
maladies are sucking at the roots of trees
We are seeing
We are closing our mouth's
we simple are waiting
waiting
waiting
until we have dug our own grave.
-
azade salehian
2012
very nice for the first one.sad ending.i enjoyed the meaning behind it.each person interprets it by him/her own idea thankenstein for sharing and keep up
Wonderful. This poem is for all. Something is coming up your sleeves. be careful before it gets hold of you. they eat and drink the roots of the extra strong hair we simple are waiting waiting waiting until we have dug our own grave. Lines that compel you to think and react. be on your toes for the coming danger. Jahan
Dear poet! Very great message you have penned here. Thats the Compulsion of we all that we are forlorn to see the Maladies. One day time deplumes every things from us and we realize. Serpents are lurking not only in your home's wall its in our home walls also. We have to be more courageous to break the chaos of the serpents. Well come to you in the field of English poem. We expect more poem from you.
nice write.... the way u built your thoughts is superb... Swiftly moving towards the concluding lines... the imagery is used masterly and one can see all if happening in front of his eyes.... mature writing
This was a nice poem, i like the artistic view here...it nice to see you starting to write an english poem, keep it up...the journey as a writer will be expended if you try more...and it give you shine! thanks for sharing but sorry for delaying respond, bcause of busy time Azadeh_Soul
This is great for starting really nice and wonderful keep up writing the good works
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Dear poet! Very great message you have penned here. Thats the Compulsion of we all that we are forlorn to see the Maladies. One day time deplumes every things from us and we realize. Serpents are lurking not only in your home's wall its in our home walls also. We have to be more courageous to break the chaos of the serpents. Well come to you in the field of English poem. We expect more poem from you.