I crafted a poem fresh
To satisfy the wild
Roasted adding jackal piece,
Lamb, honey piled
Before I could export it
To the poem site outside
A lion, tiger and a bear
Pounced over it!
25th Jan 2020
Poetry is a way of life! ! ! Musing along with your mind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks Edward. Well opined!
A wonderful imaginative and perceptive poem. Poetry is an art that is elusive to many people specially when the meaning is hidden between verses and words used are deep. An ordinary layman sometimes just want to take the words as they are without going through the message of the poem. A poem of great depth and well crafted
Yes. Nice comprehensive comment Rose Marie. Much insightful. Examines the core of my poem perfectly. Liked
Some humour has deeper roots... But I wish this had happened to many poems I read these days, and some that I write as well.
Truly said Pathak. Those who dive deep meet with the ocean stones. Thanks for your nice precise feedback. Liked
Not some Kesav, there are quite a lot who don't like poetry and music as well...a nice poem on reality
Comment irrelevant Santhakumary as far s my poem goes. But what you have opined there is good. So I retain these words here.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
There are only a few takers for poetry! Most of the people hardly realize that poetry can express thoughts in a more precise and captivating way. Behind the humor, there is a harsh hitting truth too!
Yes. Poetry is a high level mind subject. 'Arasikeshu Kavithva Nivedanam Shirasi Ma Likha Ma Likha' - Laments thus Great poet Kalidasa Thank you Valsa. Nice feedback yours